May 10

100WC-…I just coulden’t eat something so…

my goal is to try make different ages instead of one number between another number (age)

“g.g..o.” I moaned.

DING,DING,DING.

Bop,

“OUCH!” I Screamed.

oh hi my name is Darren and i’m 15 yrs old but it’s just me and my Dad, Dad is 39 yrs old.

“Time for breaky Darren.” said Dad.

I went brushed my teeth got dressed and went downstairs to eat breakfast.

But I saw what was at breakfast something really weird it had 2 eyes, one monobrow, one mouth, red horns

and it was kinda orange.

“Come on eat your breakfast don’t want your breakfast to be cold.” said Dad.

But I coulden’t eat something disgustingly weird and it looks like a red bull.

 

May 2

BTN-Battle of the Coral Sea

Summary-black

3 recalls-red

2 questions-blue

1 insight-green

This was about Australia and US helping US battled Japan in 1942 and few months earlier.

In 1942 Japan bombed  American and British forces at pearl Harbour in Hawaii bringing the US into war.

It joined UK, Australia and France that were fighting against Germany,italy and Japan,Austalia and US first teamed up in 4th of May 1942 to fight Japan in the battle of the Coral Sea.

Japan’s plan was to take control over the whole Pacific ocean, early 1942, it had already conquered alot of countries,they bombed a base in Darwin and won naval battles.

1. Is that i want to find out why France joined the war?

2.Is that why did Japan take bombed so many places for taking control over the whole Pacific ocean?

1.I now know that many people belived that the Battle of the Coral Sea saved Australia from invasion.

 

 

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May 1

100 WC …the slime dripped through..

my goal is to try getting more word choice.

 

As I walked through the stinky endless rotten cheese on the floor

I saw something odd… I saw a slime dripped through the ceiling looking just like me it came running at me and I, I blacked out.

What should we do with him??” said the slime soldier.

“IIIII don’tttt knowwwww.” Said the other slime soldier.

I saw them they were HUNDREDS of them standing looking at me as if they thought I was there leader or captain when I woke up they

punched me for one check somehow my body turned I was growing so much pain I kept screaming they saw me as their ancient, demonic demon lord…

April 27

BTN:UNDERSTANDING SPACE :)

http://www.abc.net.au/btn/story/s4645353.htm

This BTN video was about understanding space and if space is infinite.

3 recalls

2 questions

1 insights

1. Is that Earth is the 3rd planet in our solor system.

2.Is that our solor system is just one of more than 500 solor systems in the milky way.

3.Is that our milky one is just 1 of hundreds of billions of galaxies in the Universe.

1.Is that does space continue even further then the Universe or not?

2.Is that does space grow every second of our lives?

1.Is that i know now that you can never find the center when ever you try you always go around a circle or ballon.

April 26

100WC : SHIP WRECK

My goal is to always try not to

finish the story and hang it.

“Mum could you read me a story please?” I asked.

“Ok my little dinnosaur.”

she said.

She always says that  its probally because I like dinosaurs.

So my Mum told me a big history story She said.

“Once there was a big big ship as large as a King tree…”

She kept on going i was thinking about the Ship as large as a King tree i wondered what happend…

“BOOM!”

“AHHHH!” I screamed.

I was insanly sacred.

“Done.” Mum said.

“Thanks Mum goodnight.” I said.

 

March 29

100 WC

“Ahhh what a lovely day.” I said.

“Owww!”

“my head.”

wondering why its because our couch is so hard i feel like its a rock.

Just saying i have a girl that is so beautiful but everyone knows she does karate.

I almost got to some kind of weird cute, sick and brown creature best is that I got a piece of hair from it

how cool is that? (probally won’t think so but I would.)

But my mother and father was worried if that thing had rabies.

I had a camera and took a good angled picture of it.

March 26

KINDA BTN/YOUTUBE VID-Anh Do

BTN/YOUTUBE LINK

Summary-black

3 Recalls- red

2 Questions-blue

1 Inight-green

This was about Anh Do and how he came to Australia.

When Anh Do was 2 his family escaped Vietnam and was at sea for 5 days and came to Australia.
There was 2 pirate attacks and a pirate dangles a kid to threatened his life to throw him at sea but spare his life and that was Anh Do’s little brother.

Then Anh Do and his family got rescued by German ships and his parents love germans.

How could pirates attack? Because lots of peolple wouolden’t be able to find pirates?

The other is did those days have humour?

my insight is that i really wonder did they colaborate?

 

March 22

100 WC …but how can something so tiny…

BING, BING went my WORST alarm,

it was 7:30 in the morning i slowly opened my eyes when i saw my dog licking my face.

“Ok Peanut i will get up.”

i went down stairs and ate breakfast, after that i slowly went to the best park.

when I sat next to the tree and started to read I heard a tiny voice.

“Hello my name is booch.” said the tiny blue spikey creature.

“AAHHHHHH!” I screamed.

it was definitely hideous and creepy.

“RUN FOR YOUR LIVES.” I yelled.

I said to myself but how can something be so tiny speak.

 

March 22

BTN-AUSTRALIA FEDERATION

BTN LINK

3 RECALLS-RED

2 QUESTIONS-BLUE

1 INSIGHT-GREEN

SUMMARY-BLACK

This BTN video was about Australia federation adn how Australia came together as one nation.

In 1642 Dutch explorer Aiden Tasman found Tasmania if he stayed there we would be all be speaking Dutch.What we now call Australia wasn’t claimed until 1770. On Jan the 1st NSW,QLD,SA,WA and VIC joined together into one country.

Why did the British make colonies in Australia?

Why did VIC AND NSW give money to the other colonies because they have more people?

My insight is now i know that VIC and NSW had like more money and had alot more people from the other colonies.

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March 15

100 WORD CHALLENGE-… so that is why i am always last…

“Ethan hurry up!

your going to be late for school again!” yelled Mr.Choco.

then Ethen got all dress up and ate his breakfast. But the bus was going to leave so Ethan ran as fast as he can got just in time to the bus got in the bus after when he got to school it was 12:35 PM.

“OH NO it’s already 12:35 i’m going to be in so much trouble!” Ethan cried out loud.

“Oh there you are Ethan  you know that is your 15th time being late.” Libby said.

And that is why i am always last for class.